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Month 3:16

She pesters her own disposition, harries its peripheries

like a cat snagging carpet, immoderate claws

vexing nap after petty nap. Ah, but too soon tiring,

resigning. Retreating like a cat to its bed, its idle nap.


by Therese L. Broderick

About ThereseLBroderick

Independent community poet living in Albany, New York USA.

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  1. Hi Therese, lots of good sounds in this one. Having listened to each of your pieces now, all I would say is that there is a loud background buzz which detracts a little. Don’t know what system you’re using (I’m not a computer whizz!) but some others I’ve listened to don’t seem to have that; you might be able to cut it out.


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