She pesters her own disposition, harries its peripheries
like a cat snagging carpet, immoderate claws
vexing nap after petty nap. Ah, but too soon tiring,
resigning. Retreating like a cat to its bed, its idle nap.
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by Therese L. Broderick
Hi Therese, lots of good sounds in this one. Having listened to each of your pieces now, all I would say is that there is a loud background buzz which detracts a little. Don’t know what system you’re using (I’m not a computer whizz!) but some others I’ve listened to don’t seem to have that; you might be able to cut it out.
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